Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Works Cited

Clay, Rebecca A. Stressed in America. American Psychological Association 2015. Web 21 November 2015.
Dienstmann, Giovanni. Scientific Benefits of Mediation-6 Things You Might Be Missing Out On. Meditation Blog & Non Sectarian Spirituality. Liveanddare.com Web 22 November 2015
Blue, Laura. Strongest Study Yet Shows Meditation Can Lower Risk of Heart Attack and Stroke. 2012. healthland.time.com Web 22 Nov 2015
Wickelgren, Ingrid. How Social and Emotional Learning Could Harm Our Kids. 2012.   blogs.scientificamerican.com Web 22 Nov 2015
Wickelgren, Ingrid. Social and Emotional Learning Empowers Children. 2012. blogs.scientificamerican.com Web 22 Nov 2015
Decarr, Kristin. Mindfulness’ Movement Aims to Reduce Stress in Schools. Education News 2015. Web 22 November 2015.

Reduced Psychological Distress in Racial and Ethnic Minority Students Practicing the Transcendental Meditation Program. Journal of Instructional Psychology. Jun2011, Vol. 38 Issue 2, p109-116. 8p. (JOIP)

Paper #3 Rough Draft. Teaching Meditation in Schools ?

Anthony Heaps
English 101-5:30
Dr. Sonia Begert
23 November 2015

Is teaching meditation in school a good idea?
            It’s pretty hectic out there. At the moment of this writing the news is reporting on conflicts that are currently plaguing the world. Arguments are currently being made about our country’s involvement in affairs that are in other parts of the world. There are concerns about threats being made and the world appears to be very chaotic.  Moving away from the stresses of the world, there are even points of stress and concern within our own local and individual lives. We are constantly in the crises of having to make daily decisions that affect various aspects of our lives. These decisions involve things such as spending, housing, career, food, clothing, and also having to navigate through various social expectations. Just managing our personal world can be pretty hectic.
Beginning early in our lives and education we are taught about things that we should be doing and how we are meant to act or be. This education is meant to help assist us in navigating life as we grow up and eventually move into our lives as adults with differing roles and responsibilities. We are taught mathematics in school, which may be used later in life for managing our spending, balancing a budget, or organization of varying projects. We are also taught how to read and write which can help us further our education by being able to understand and have various insights into the world through the words, thoughts and ideas of others expressed in literature. We even have Physical Education in order to keep us active and allow our growing bodies the chance to get its exercise.
 Our school education taught many of these subjects in an effort to allow us to become part of a growing world with its numerous experiences. We are also taught about history in an effort to help us form an understanding of the past and learn from it to move on to help build the future. I recall being told by a teacher in Junior High School “We are taught history so that we may learn from it and hope to not repeat our mistakes.”  The irony of that statement is that history still seems to repeat itself. We are in the 21st Century and we still have wars, arguments about racism, and religion. All of these conflicts having been around in varying incarnations throughout history. Being quick to anger, not being able to think clearly, or respond well to stressing influences often contribute to the environmental factors which may eventually lead to some of the larger conflicts that take place.
The lack of a healthy stress response in and of itself is not a sole contributing factor to the conditions of the larger world issues but it does make a difference in our own individual lives. In an article interpreting the results of a survey about stress conducted by the American Psychological Association, Rebecca Clay states “Stress is up. Most Americans are suffering from moderate to high stress, with 44 percent reporting that their stress levels have increased over the past five years” (Clay) If education is the means by which we are meant to learn and be prepared for the world, perhaps it may be a good idea to incorporate forms of stress, anxiety, and emotional management into our formal education. Given the amount of stimulation available to us thanks to our growing technologies for communication and entertainment it can be easy to be overwhelmed with not only having to make decisions for our individual lives but being aware of everything else going on in the world.
 One idea that has been that has been proposed is the idea of teaching meditation in schools. Proponents of the idea believe that having these tools for stress management and developing focus and control of our emotions at an early age can help make for a better functioning individual. There are numerous amounts of benefits associated with meditation “such as decreased depression, improved focus, reduced stress and anxiety in general (Giovanni).” The benefits associated with meditation not only involve mental states of wellbeing but have even shown to have clinical health benefits as well. In an online Time Magazine article author Laura Blue reports on a study that says “researchers found a 48% reduction in the overall risk of heart attack, stroke, and death from any cause among members of the meditation group compared to those from the health education group.” It would appear that the idea of including meditation as a part of our learning would be an asset to our current educational curriculum. There are concerns however about the realities of how it may actually have influence in our lives.
A school teacher from Vancouver, Canada named Tina Olsen expressed some of the concerns raised about teaching meditation in school in a “critique of a social and emotional learning program called MindUP” which teaches meditation. (Wickelgren) Olsen said:
Mindfulness meditation such as this can be a way of bringing the mind into an altered state of consciousness. Many people who practice meditation have encountered unexpected negative side effects such as a sensation of being disconnected from one’s body or from reality, among other frightening reactions. Teachers of MindUP are exposing children to these potential dangers.
            To teach a child to practice non-judgmental awareness is to risk interfering with the child’s ability to heed his sense of right and wrong. A child must make judgements to choose between right and wrong actions. When he acts in accordance with his sense of what is right, he grows in moral character, and develops greater self-control.” (qtd. in Wickelgren How Social and Emotional Learning Could Harm Our Kids)
In response to Olsen’s critique Rebecca Calos the Director of Programs and Training for The Hawn Foundation which sponsored the MindUP program she wrote:
In her critique, Tina Olesen, a school teacher in Canada, equates MindUP’s core practice to “Buddhist-style" meditation, and warns that students engaging in a few minutes of deep breathing are in danger of experiencing a terrifying “sensation of being disconnected from one’s body.” In fact, the core practice increases mind and body awareness, and children routinely report that they feel refreshed and calm after the exercise. Olesen claims that this practice interferes with "a child’s innate self-regulator," when in truth, the core practice enables children to recognize their “self-regulator” and more readily access it even in times of stress and anxiety.
In addition to Calos’s response it can be noted that often the arguments of issues regarding racism and religion stem from preconceived ideas and notions about particular races or beliefs. Teaching non-judgmental awareness could in some small ways alleviate and possibly prevent the escalation of arguments and incidents based on subjects of racism and religion. Through personal observation it can be said a number of unnecessary incidents can arise from the assumption of racism or negative religious connotation when in fact no such intentions exist within or are intended by the communicator. The non- judgmental awareness aspect of one form of meditation can be a beneficial contributor to our human interactions.
Further concerns that have been raised about teaching mediation in schools has to do with the fear of it being “religion in disguise.” (Decarr.) This concern stems from the fact that the most effective practice of meditation being employed in the majority of studies on its effects called mindfulness comes from ancient Buddhist practices. The concern however is not as warranted as it might seem. The reason this may not be a warranted concern is that the practice of meditation does not require one to learn or be indoctrinated by the Buddhist religion or teachings. The practice of meditation involves developing habits of deep breathing, focusing attention and awareness. These habits are not mutually exclusive or tied to the Buddhist religion. The very act of observation is a component of mediation practices and yet has no ties to religion but is instead is something that occurs naturally in the process of learning a new skill.         
There are of a number of studies and research still being completed regarding the subject of the effects of meditation. The majority of the findings in the various studies point towards the benefits of introducing meditation. One particular study introduced the process of Transcendental Meditation with students from different public schools in 4 different states, for the purpose of “Reduced Psychological Distress in Racial and Ethnic Minority Students Practicing the Transcendental Meditation Program” (JOIP.) They wrote, “The results of this study indicated that practice of the Transcendental Meditation program is effective in reducing psychological distress in racial and ethnic minority secondary school students…there were no treatment-by-ethnicity interactions, indicating that the results were consistent across ethnic groups.”(JOIP)
In every moment of our education we are being prepared for the experiences we will have in life. Our ability to cope and adapt to the world will be an essential part of our success in our experiences. Incorporating beneficial practices such as meditation into our education would be an valuable tool for helping us in our interaction in the world. In effect reducing and managing our stress not only benefits ourselves but those whom we interact with. We do this by not unduly placing our burdens on others because we have the tools to manage ourselves. We have the tools to find ways to bring back the peace and enjoyment in our lives because we can more effectively manage our responses.  The evidence suggests at least the idea is worth considering.
           
           


Thursday, November 19, 2015

In Class Lab

 Sue McGreevey. Eight Weeks to a Better Brain. Harvard Gazette.  January 2011. http://news.harvard.edu/gazette/story/2011/01/eight-weeks-to-a-better-brain/
In an article written by Sue McGreevey for the Harvard Gazette Sue wrote that those who participated in the study that had reported reductions in stress also had correlating effect of less grey matter an area of the brain associated with functions relating to anxiety and stress.

David L. Kirp. Meditation transforms roughest San Francisco schools. SF Gate. January 12, 2014

In an Article by David L. Kirp. “On the California Achievement Test, twice as many students in Quiet Time schools have become proficient in English, compared with students in similar schools where the program doesn't exist, and the gap is even bigger in math. Teachers report they're less emotionally exhausted and more resilient.
Works Cited
Gina M. Biegel, Kirk Warren Brown, Shauna L. Shapiro, & Christine M. Schubert. Mindfulness-Based Stress Reduction for the Treatment of Adolescent Psychiatric Outpatients: A Randomized Clinical Trial. Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology 2009 Print.

According to  A Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology by  Gina M. Biegel, Kirk Warren Brown, Shauna L. Shapiro, & Christine M. Schubert   “There has been very little research testing the efficacy of mindfulness-based interventions with adolescents; however, preliminary evidence is suggestive. Bootzin and Stevens (2005) examined the effects of an integrative mindfulness-based intervention with adolescent substance abusers ages 13–19 years” (856)

Comparing Articles


When we compared our articles with Spriggs’ essay we all noticed that they all relate in a clear and explicit position that they stood by the whole time. They all had responses to what other people had said about the subject. Some of the differences were that an essay by Sophia A. McClennon was that she made general assumptions of information and didn’t have much specific evidence to support her statements in attempting to argue her position. There was a “straw man” appeal in one part of her text. In an article by Sean McElwee, he took a position on abolishing the death penalty. He had good examples of both sides but had a strong opinion on abolishing the sentence because he feels it is unjust. He used statistics and facts to help him have a strong position and to help us see how he feels. He used a lot of compares/contrasts to other Countries and how there have been a number of people in prison being proven to be killed by the death sentence but they turn out to be innocent. We noticed that the essays that were most compelling were the ones that effectively utilized other sources of information other than their own opinions, and the ethos of these articles were better established by those who did “their homework”.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Katherine Spriggs On Buying Local Thinking about the Text Questions 1-4

1.) It's clear that this is a topic that matters to Katherine Spriggs. Has she convinced you that it matters-and if so, how? How does Spriggs establish the importance of her topic?
Katherine Spriggs has convinced me that the topic of buying local does matter. The first thing that is noticeable is that she "has done her homework." She establishes her authority to speak on the subject in this way as well as citing personal experiences which gives to the reader a sense of first hand knowledge and that she understands the subject. As a result she is better able to establish her point about the effects of buying local. She addresses how buying or not buying local affects various parts of our lives and culture and in doing this establishes the importance of her topic.

2.) What counterarguments or positions other than her own does Spriggs consider-and how does she respond in each case?
Spriggs considers the other positions differing from her own on points regarding the subjects of how buying local can affect the environment and also the impact on the economy. She offers the view that it can help the environment by "minimizing waste, use of chemicals, soil erosion and pollution" because of the encouragement of small polyculture farms. (Spriggs) She responds to the counterargument that it may have negative effects on environment because it would be better to " buy food from the world region where it grows best." (Macdonald) She acknowledges and addresses the point he makes specifically and does not argue against it directly but instead uses it to bring more a specific focus on how the the focus of buying local should be used.  She responds to another argument about the use of resources on small farm being not as efficient in their use of resources as large farms. She addresses the concern by giving more specific information about the effectiveness of use of resources of these small farms. Spriggs response to each of the counter arguments by not discounting the points or concerns raised, but instead gives further information not being addressed by those concerns which may change the view or understanding of the subject.

3.) Choose a section of Spriggs' essay that you find especially effective or ineffective. Referring to the genre features discussed on p.66. (Everyone's an Author) describe what makes this part of her argument persuasive- or not.
 I found the article as a whole to be particularly effective  as she addressed many different angles, gave a good amount of information and used that to make a compelling argument. A specific section that I personally found effective was her story of the family friend whom was a farmer. This part of the argument created the feeling of a more personal understanding of the subject and as a result helps the reader to relate because it is an aspect of the subject being told to them from her directly (in writing) as opposed to it being an impersonal argument. It helps establish a sympathy understanding as well as the logic she puts forth in why the topic matters.

4.) Spriggs includes several photos in her essay. How do they contribute to her argument?
The photos help the reader to have a better "image" of what she is describing when she talks about the differences of the small polyculture farms and the large monoculture farms. Also the differences in the contrasting color of the crops of the two farms makes the smaller farms crops appear healthier. The photos in general help give better image to the argument.



Thursday, November 12, 2015

Paper Brainstorming for #3

Should college be free.
The importance of being yourself despite your current environments possible opposition to characteristics of your personality.
Why I shouldn't be writing an argument paper.

Video Summary and Analysis

The AT&T Texting and Driving Documentary—“The Last Test” Summary
The Public Service video for texting while driving begins with a police officer arriving to the scene of an accident and moves to interviews where people whom had lost loved ones in accidents whom were texting while driving and of those whom were severely injured from accidents while texting and driving. They first interview starts with a friend of a girl who was texting a friend that died in an accident. They move into an interview where a boy whom was in an accident from texting while driving whom is disabled as a result of the accident. They then move to a mother and the friends of a girl whom died in the hospital from an accident that was caused by driving distracted as a result from texting while driving. They show the mother and friends singing and celebrating a birthday for the girl whom passed away with the physical presence of the “birthday girl” being absent from the celebration. It then shows the mom crying and proceeds to talk about the person whom had died. They end the video by having people whom were affected by these accidents caused by texting and driving hold up signs that bore nothing other than the last texts of the victims of these tragedies. The last image they show in the video is of a rose on a highway with the mother of a victim looking at the rose with tears rolling down her face. The public service announcement ends with the text “TXTING & DRIVING…IT CAN WAIT” and saying it was a message from at&t.

            Analyis of  AT&T Texting and Driving Documentary –“The Last Text” Video

The argument made in the video took an emotional appeal. The video used images of car accidents and the testimonies of individuals and people involved and affected by the accidents that took place as a result of texting while driving. The interview of the officer in the beginning starts the video and has the officer describing his feeling and experience arriving to the scene of an accident. This serves to set the stage for the argument of the testimonies and individual stories of people whom lost friends and family to the accidents. The use of telling the stories of  their personal experiences and the descriptions given by the friends and family of the people whom had passed to show who they were a part of these families lives serves to bring a reality of whom the person was. This also helps further to make the emotional appeal because the viewer in essence gets to know the victim. The narrative of an individual whom had almost died and had barely survived made even more of a case for the argument of not texting while driving because the story of how the incident affected his life is told from his firsthand experience. The video also used the account of the officer whom arrived at the scene and his statement of how it was not his first time arriving to such a scene and that these were not simply individual and separated instruments brings an awareness of how it is an issue that matters to the viewer. Near the end of the video in which they show the simple and short texts which were the last texts of those who died and the one survivor in the video held up on signs by those affected from the loss of loved ones and the accidents itself made an effort to show how those simple words which altogether were nothing of noted significance had been the reason for the tragic experiences. The end of the video following with the message “TXTING & DRIVING…IT CAN WAIT” was the overall purpose of the argument made in the video and was summed up very simply in the end followed by the information given for the motivating force behind this video.